No.DateHello. My name is GushashI live in the bea
这句话语法有错吗？请英语翻译高手看看
1.该大写的地方请大写，注意下吧。
2.“right now”不很恰当，因为居住在某地是一段时间内的动作，而“right now”是某个时刻。建议改为“now”.
3."This is my first time"这句建议改为“It is the first time for me to stand here to make a ‘Victory Speech’”.
4.“Some of my friends always told me”时态不对，改为“Some of my friends have always being telling me”
帮忙翻译这段文字. 很急~
No1
Hello every Member of Jury Teachers, My name is xxx, from the experimental school in Guizhou Province, 18-year-old, I am 2009 graduating fifth grade students. My lively and cheerful character, good communication, loving a wide range of spare time look likes history books and a variety of sports activities. Life, my life is a smile girl, never compromise difficult. Today, I hope my smile, my confidence, to enjoy my career by adding color, adding to the dream of my forces, I think a confident, brave, strong, love to laugh my aviation industry can bring about a forces, bring happiness to everyone, to leave a good impression on the judges Teacher
No.2
Hello every distinguished teacher ， My name is xx, from the experimental school in Guizhou Province, 18-year-old, I am a cheerful and lively personality, a broad-loving girl, is a soft spot for air hostesses, flight attendants because I enjoy confident smile , be able to enjoy their own happy smile will be passed on to the feeling of everyone. I believe my decision is correct, I hope that teachers can give me a chance, remember me, My name is xx, a dream girl .
各位麻烦帮我翻译一下 看看有什么病句没有.
你好,你的领导。我的名字是某某某。我来自北京,今年25。我的大学教育是目前研究的科学专业管理,在网络在网页设计公司。我的家人,我的父母,我的爱好是游泳、篮球运动员,经常举办小型活动的歌唱,我朋友之间是乐观的态度方面的研究进展。工作是积极参与的活动,一个严肃的问题单位完成任务的领导。是一个有上进心,有良好的员工队伍,并且我正期待着这个工作
请帮我看看这段话中的错误
Hello everyone，my name is XX.
It is my great hornor to stand here and introduce myself to you.
I know I didn't study hard enough,and I'm rather surprised that I could be a member of this class. To be in the same class with so many good students makes me nervous.
After these days' study, I feel that there is a big gap between my outstanding classmates and myself. Although sometimes this made me feel great pressure, it also helped me study harder than before. No pains no gains. I believe one day I can be as good as you.
The Mayas made a prediction that December 12th 2012 would be the doomsday. Nobody knows what will happen in the future. Try our best to live a happy and meaningful life is the only thing we can do.
Thanks.